Need critique on my idea

Google Summer of Code
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Respected Sir/Madam,

I am a first year student from Army Institute of Technology, Pune, Maharashtra, India.
As I am very fond of dogs, cats and pets in general. I would like to implement Beagleboard products to make a Pet Surveillance and assistance device. I would like to know what I can do with it and need suggestions on how I can implement it. Any critique is welcome.
Please let me know what to write in the “about the project” section of my proposal for the same.

Thanking you.

Yours Sincerely,
Yatharth Mathur

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Respected sir/ma’am,

Can you please review my proposal and suggest edits to the implementation and edits to improve the proposal overall? I will be in great debt.
Thanking you

Yours Sincerely,
Yatharth Mathur